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    Posted: Jul-15-2006 at 22:43
Just setting this up here so I can communicate with my readers!

http://www.utopiastories.com/crimsonlatex

So what do you guys think so far? Certainly I'm no real artist, but I do what I can. I'd like to give more depth to the characters as I go, and I've got alot planned out that will allow that.


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Very interesting!  This comic has a lot of potential here!
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*We're reading it only for the sexual stuff. Focus on that.
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Interesting characters so far, and looks like really nice artwork. 

Looks like a winning combination so far. 

Now, back to work.  I want to see the next one tomorrow. 

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Originally posted by Darkraptor1

Very interesting!  This comic has a lot of potential here!


Thanks Raptor, I appreciate it. I'm not all that great at art, but I'm worried most about my eastern and western interests clashing and hurting what I -am- capable of.
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Originally posted by Trekkie

Interesting characters so far, and looks like really nice artwork. 

Looks like a winning combination so far. 

Now, back to work.  I want to see the next one tomorrow. 

:)



Hehehehe, thanks Trekkie! I wish I had more time to work on the comic, but full time and on and off overtime taps alot of my life I'm afraid. Regardless, I'm very glad you like what I've done thus far!
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I will be posting these on my site pretty soon, but thought I would share them here as well.  Here are some profiles of the two main characters so far , Enjoy!


   


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Latex-Acolyte, if you have any difficulties with story lines or ideas, i'm sure we could provide a few...or if you're looking for guest or cameo charachters, i'm sure we could provide material as well!
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Originally posted by Darkraptor1

Latex-Acolyte, if you have any difficulties with story lines or ideas, i'm sure we could provide a few...or if you're looking for guest or cameo charachters, i'm sure we could provide material as well!


I do appreciate the offer ^_^
Right now, I have everything following a set pattern, it's the pacing that's killing me. Webcomics can so easily fall into tedium, and since I only update every other week, I have to be sure I don't bore anyone.
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Now that comic 6 is up and I can start getting crazy with the story, tell me guys, is it interesting?
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Originally posted by Latex-Acolyte

Now that comic 6 is up and I can start getting crazy with the story, tell me guys, is it interesting?


Yes, I'm still a happy camper here! The storyline works and I like the additional comments left by you in the space below your artwork.
As someone whos drawing skills are limited to well-water I really enjoy your work LA. <grin>

Please continue!

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Yes, I'm still a happy camper here! The storyline works and I like the additional comments left by you in the space below your artwork.
As someone whos drawing skills are limited to well-water I really enjoy your work LA. <grin>

Please continue!

phoebe


Thank kyou Phoebe, I'm very glad you're enjoying it! Also glad people dig those little tag lines at the bottom :P
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I like the way the story is progressing!  I also really like the art, despite how harsh you are on yourself LA, I think you have a lot of talent.  I can't wait to see how everything turns out!  Oh, and those tag lines are awesome! Who doesn't love a little random humor?
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Originally posted by bsdmco

I like the way the story is progressing!  I also really like the art, despite how harsh you are on yourself LA, I think you have a lot of talent.  I can't wait to see how everything turns out!  Oh, and those tag lines are awesome! Who doesn't love a little random humor?


Thanks! Especially for the vote of artistic confidence (heaven knows I don't have any of my own :P). I'm also glad you like the tag lines, those are turning out to be a bigger hit than I anticipated ^_^
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Originally posted by Latex-Acolyte

Certainly I'm no real artist
 
I think you're doing yourself an injustice, your drawing is wonderful, the story is excellent and I eagerly look forward to seeing more.
 
Thanks for providing some very amusing webcomic.
 
 
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I also really like the art, despite how harsh you are on yourself LA
I think you're doing yourself an injustice, your drawing is wonderful

Now where have I heard this before LA ?


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The story is getting fun. It's interesting to see the tow maidslaves being so protective. Looking forward to each episode.

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The story is getting fun. It's interesting to see the tow maidslaves being so protective. Looking firward to each episode.


Thanks! I thought twin maids would be a fun idea, and even moreso if I left some anger in them! Glad it worked out well ^_^
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I also really like the art, despite how harsh you are on yourself LA
I think you're doing yourself an injustice, your drawing is wonderful

Now where have I heard this before LA ?


I have no idea what you're talking about good sir! Certainly it couldn't have anything to do with the lecture on confidence you gave me last week :P
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Originally posted by gromet

Originally posted by Latex-Acolyte

Certainly I'm no real artist
 
I think you're doing yourself an injustice, your drawing is wonderful, the story is excellent and I eagerly look forward to seeing more.
 
Thanks for providing some very amusing webcomic.
 
 


D'awww. I do appreciate it. Even if I'm not satisfied with it, so long as I make you guys happy, I know I'm doing something worthwhile ^^
Thank very much for the warm words!
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Woot! New comic up! And this one doesn't look so bad O_o
Lemme know what you guys think!

http://www.utopiastories.com/code/show_album.asp/aID/1000/cID/10027
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The story is progressing well and the images are excellent, well done and keep up the good work.
 
Now I have to wait for the next episode...
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I'm liking your story too and am curious to find out who is slave-one.

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The story is progressing well and the images are excellent, well done and keep up the good work.
 
Now I have to wait for the next episode...


I'm glad you're enjoying it enough to stay interested!
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I'm liking your story too and am curious to find out who is slave-one.

phoebe


Thanks Phoebe! It's going to be a long time before anyone gets that answer though!
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Hey again everyone, it's update time!
New comic at:
http://www.utopiastories.com/code/show_album.asp/aID/1000/cID/10030
Hope you all enjoy it ^^
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