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The Abduction

http://www.grometsplaza.net/boundstories/storiesad/the_abduction.html

I am not going to say to much here, since I only read the first half of this story, before skipping to the end to see if my theory was correct - it was.  Not that I am going to tell you what my theory was

This is a very well written story, and uses the man's flash backs to fill in the events leading up to his awakening in this strange environment very well.  We are fed the details piece at a time, while keeping the readers attentions focused on the kinky present.

One mystery to me was how the man was simultaneously so ignorant of the nature of the bondage toys all around him, but also so excited by so much of what was happening.  I would expect a bit more familiarity with at least some of these concepts given both the story codes at the start and his obvious enjoyment of some of the events.

The sense of confusion, panic, and the total loss of control and power at being kidnapped without warning, at awakening in this strange place are very well done.  These reactions are also what led me to stop reading early, since I was not really enjoying this, it is not my thing.

Having said that there is a lot to like here, and I recommend it for anyone with an interest in kidnap fantasies.